the ache of the rake
is eliminated by
the visible change.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
... and occasional Tanka. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). This year attempting to write a Haiku every day using a seasonal kigo - 366 Haiku a Day.
the ache of the rake
is eliminated by
the visible change.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
raking in the chips,
the sounds of wins and loss.
it’s always fall.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
Millais: Autumn Leaves
such an idyll i can't find
from raking up leaves
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
the daily leaf war
begins, my weapon a rake -
“Just wait,” my wife says.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
nails forming a rake
scratch four lines across my face,
my last fall from grace.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.