coffee while you work
needs to be judged and balanced
to the right degree
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu , I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
eyes inside a bush
grizzled face innocently
awkward actually
From words on page 233 of Castle in the Air by Diana Wynne Jones (HarperCollins, 2003/1990).
a quiet morning
trying silent recycling.
but it's just so hard -
the paper is no problem,
but my god, the tins! the tins!
a face silhouette
smile, prettiness, crookedness
each now paid no mind
From words on page 198 of Lapvona by Otessa Moshfegh (Vintage, 2022).
more control to breathe
beneath her flesh she had
grown pride and space
From words on page 198 of Lapvona by Otessa Moshfegh (Vintage, 2022).
when the night moves fast
and you know that you've slept well
yet cannot grow light
*
The feeling of heaviness after what should have been a decent night’s sleep but it felt like it went by too quickly, completely dreamless, and somehow without relaxation, and now you can’t shake that weighty feeling that comes from a lack of sleep.
deep breath and new strength,
mountains, river, waterfall,
green hills, forests, sky
From words on page 170 of The Magician's Nephew by C.S.Lewis (HarperCollins, 1955/2009).
youth falls asleep and
lilac petals are scattered
across battlefields
Written for the May 2025 Tricycle Haiku Challenge using the Spring season word, lilac, but was not entered.