the dew covered car
looks as misty as I feel
wipe the sleep away
Written for the Tricycle September 2023 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn season word, dew and was also submitted to the Japan Society Haiku Corner (2023, Week 42).
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu , I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
the dew covered car
looks as misty as I feel
wipe the sleep away
Written for the Tricycle September 2023 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn season word, dew and was also submitted to the Japan Society Haiku Corner (2023, Week 42).
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