to those that i write
but lose before they’re written -
wait for me beyond
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu , I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
when the night moves fast
and you know that you've slept well
yet cannot grow light
*
The feeling of heaviness after what should have been a decent night’s sleep but it felt like it went by too quickly, completely dreamless, and somehow without relaxation, and now you can’t shake that weighty feeling that comes from a lack of sleep.
deep breath and new strength,
mountains, river, waterfall,
green hills, forests, sky
From words on page 170 of The Magician's Nephew by C.S.Lewis (HarperCollins, 1955/2009).
youth falls asleep and
lilac petals are scattered
across battlefields
Written for the Tricycle February 2024 May Challenge using the Spring season word, lilac, but was not entered.