my old Trini friend
gave me soca and doubles
he’s always been dear
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu, I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
small teeth holding eyes.
dining considered, dismissed
absent-mindedly.
From words on page 268 of When Hitler Stole Pink Rabbit by Judith Kerr (HarperCollins, 2008/1971).
here must be somewhere
my excuse, hilda, is there
tall blue hair girl, she.
From words on page 33 (ish) of Hilda and the Bird Parade by Luke Pearson (Flying Eye Books, 2016/2013).
when all is shoogly
but really it is just you
you have to stay still
*
when treadmill shoogly
get some water inside you
to steady the ship