elegance shines out
like a lotus serenely
sat on the surface
(nobody sees the anchors
no one knows what’s underneath)
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu, I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
elegance shines out
like a lotus serenely
sat on the surface
(nobody sees the anchors
no one knows what’s underneath)
elegance shines out
like a lotus serenely
sat on the surface
Written for the Tricycle July 2023 Haiku Challenge using the Summer season word, lotus.