spook secretary
the story, the spilt coffee
the gunman's moment
From words on page 191 of Slow Horses by Mick Herron (John Murray Press, 2002).
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu, I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
spook secretary
the story, the spilt coffee
the gunman's moment
From words on page 191 of Slow Horses by Mick Herron (John Murray Press, 2002).
the bell sounded thin,
or morning hour exhausted,
like a mashed tin can
From words on page 182 of All the Pretty Horses by Cormac McCarthy (Picador/Pan Books, 1993).
sleep failed silence breath
“i don’t want you to see this”
a glimpse empty trapped
From words on page 263 of The Cracked Mirror by Chris Brookmyre (Abacus Books, 2025).
a glass brain useless
eyes down a glimpse devils here
the oubliette voice
From words on page 263 of The Cracked Mirror by Chris Brookmyre (Abacus Books, 2025).
the New Town badger
in a Mazda (passenger)
sleep eyes in half-light
From words on page 263 of The Cracked Mirror by Chris Brookmyre (Abacus Books, 2025).