the wonder in his
eyes, watching through the back door,
as snowflakes fall down.
Written for the Tricycle December 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Winter season word, snowflake, but was not entered.
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu, I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
the wonder in his
eyes, watching through the back door,
as snowflakes fall down.
Written for the Tricycle December 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Winter season word, snowflake, but was not entered.