the ache of the rake
is eliminated by
the visible change.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu , I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
the ache of the rake
is eliminated by
the visible change.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
raking in the chips,
the sounds of wins and loss.
it’s always fall.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
Millais: Autumn Leaves
such an idyll i can't find
from raking up leaves
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
the daily leaf war
begins, my weapon a rake -
“Just wait,” my wife says.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.
nails forming a rake
scratch four lines across my face,
my last fall from grace.
Written for the Tricycle November 2022 Haiku Challenge using the Autumn/Fall season word, rake.