myriad birdsong
and no other sound at all
could lose myself here
... and occasional Tanka... and Haibun. Started after a competition on the unbound.co.uk blog (see #1 and #2). Mostly actually senryu , I think. This year attempting to publish a Haiku every day - 365 Haiku a Day. For good or for ill, I always aim to stick rigidly to a 5-7-5 structure - forgive me if I have counted the syllables wrong, often they are how I have said, or thought, them in my head rather than their official number.
the sound of the stream
amplified by its steep banks -
it hardly seems real.
or is this the modern way -
disbelieve reality.
show the world what you
see, expose what should be seen
by those who would pay
and to those who can change it
and keep it changed forever
a rope between trees
a blanket slung over it
an adventure day
Written for the Tricycle February 2024 Haiku Challenge using the Winter season word, blanket.
frost across the roof
like an open weave blanket
made out of diamonds
Written for the Tricycle February 2024 Haiku Challenge using the Winter season word, blanket.